Willow Dreams
Okay, Dutch. This may not be as simple as I thought it was. No deep meanings here, though. Better?Willow DreamsBy gnarl of twisted bough of ancient bole,still standing near root strings of willow...
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Hi BrokenSword,Thanks for posting this piece. Although I seem to remember requesting 'a nice and SIMPLE sonnet' this once...Sapristi! Perhaps it's the mere fact I'm Dutch, but like AstroWeaver said on...
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This is a revision as I caught a metric flaw in the first after I posted this. Sorry.-BrokenSwordWillow DreamsBy gnarl of twisted bough of ancient bole,still standing near root strings of willow...
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DutchSorry, still to involved, eh? Maybe I just can't do 'em any other way. I will work on it, though. I like challenges. Hope I didn't waste your time too badly.-BrokenSword
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Dear BrokenSword,Just read your sonnet and on the whole it's beautiful. Your choice of language is fresh, not hackneyed. The tone appears to be consistent with the mood. The couplet was impressive....
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TamaraThanks for reading/ helping me with this. I agree, your line sounds a lot better. I'll change it over to that. Sometimes when I'm writing a sonnet, I feel I have to try to get a whole lot of...
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BrokenSword,This is enchanting. The title recalls "Old Man Willow" from Tolkien. However, this willow is not as malevolent. Melissa
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I like this very much, especially the line"such whispered kisses leap from midnights pain"good work!
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